Rough Cut 2 and Feedback

We need to reshoot the second shot as Vlad is facing away from the camera. When we reshoot we'll get the same background, just change Vlad's position. We've added transitions that correspond with the artists hand movements. We wanted to add more movement to our video, we did this using the fig rig and more movement in the artist. We also wanted to add a little bit of humour, making our artist more relatable, for this Warren danced around more in a few shots.  In the shot of Warren standing in front of the park, we positioned Warren in front of the big tree, making him and his hat stand out more, as the hat would blend into the sky. We used the razor to cut up our shots in time to the beat, this creates a really nice effect, making the video look work really well with the genre. In the last shot, the camera moves from Warren to Vlad depending on who's verse it is. This shot is very dark and goes in and out of focus. We may need to reshoot this part. We also need to continue adding more shots, so that they change every 4 seconds.

Callum mentioned that Vlad is miming the words rather than singing them, and that it shows. He liked the slide transitions, but said they need to be improved to look more natural. In the beginning of the shot in front of the Italian restaurant, the camera zooms in. This is going to be edited out. The last thing he said was that we need more cuts. Marisa agrees there isn't enough edits. Apart from the shots that cut out the artists feet, we have included many shots that are nicely framed. She also commented on the performance of the artists.