Thursday, 6 October 2016

Blogging health check 1 feedback

Warren - 11 posts. This is a real mixture Warren! It's all a bit out of order-so it will be great when you're in the swing of blogging and the posts have more logical flow. Can you have a look at blog 9 - previous student video. I don't have permission to see it. I'm pleased with the variety of technology you've used so far.  Andrew Goodwin prezi is good, but can you please revisit Laura Mulvey and add her theory on dismembering. Also - have a look at your yougov post blog 8. It doesn't feel complete - so add the purpose and comments on both artist's findings.
Targets:
1) try to keep the blog in order from now on
2) make additions/alterations to posts mentioned above - yougov, Mulvey and previous student video

Reflection
I've actually progressed a lot last year because around this time I was on a C. However I would have given myself 11 marks because I felt like I was liking detail however my use of IT has been better than it was last year.
Three things to improve on
-keeping to an order when doing my work as it makes it easier for me and my teacher.
- Make sure I try to go into more detail so I can next time get a higher mark and also despite me using different IT skills, I think to use different software to attain a higher mark
-Finish all my blogs on time so they don't build up.

No comments:

Post a Comment